What is says up there! Your character's telling us a one-line love story. Who's it about? Is it autobiographical? Is there lots of romance, intrigue, a happy ending? We're all waiting!
In case it's not obvious, there shouldn't be any blank top-levels.
Win over your audience! Field questions about your plot.
You want a love story, let me tell you a real Hallmark Channel-worthy one: a girl, her big dreams, and a crown made from the backbones of a million dead humans.
....he was lost and wandering, she was clueless and thrusted into the thick of something bigger than all of them, or he found himself dragged back by the past coming into full view.
Her love was as twisted as the knife she had killed him with as she drew her last breath, yet not even death would stop her from chasing him across time.
She was as beautiful as she was sad, always dancing, always giving her all for others--Yet never realizing that the dance he found most beautiful was the one she danced for herself, one that she once danced with his hand in hers.
'm not so good at telling stories, but I know that there was a girl who was locked up, away from the world, and she loved the only boy who was ever nice to her...I don't like the way this story ends.
He was always the weakest, useless, and so fragile that just a tap in the right place shatter him--And yet I couldn't keep my eyes off of him every time he got back up to keep fighting.
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