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The HMD Meme With Actual Constructive Criticism

Wikipedia : Constructive criticism is the process of offering valid and well-reasoned opinions about the work of others, usually involving both positive and negative comments, in a friendly manner rather than an oppositional one.

[The Rules]

1. Post as the mun, and write down all your characters you would like to have any constructive criticism about.

2. Other people write down their crit about your RP-ing and your characters, etc, logged in or anon. Just praising people is fine, too.

3. No flaming or bashing allowed. No wanking, please!

4. Please keep in mind when you write your crit that your opinions may not always be right. Some things simply are a matter of individual taste, for example.

5. Please also remember that people are not obliguated to accept all and every crit sent their as valid. Sometimes it is, sometimes it isn't.

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Supernatural;
John Winchester |

didhisbest | Private HMD
Bobby Singer |

anoldgrouch | Private HMD
Dean Winchester |

onasteelhorse/

righteousdestiny | Private HMD
Sam Winchester |

luciferspromdress/

onlytobenormal | Private HMD

Others;
Dylan Massett | Bates Motel |

theotherson | Private HMD
Merle Dixon | The Walking Dead |

wontbeg | Private HMD
Nice Guy Eddie | Reservoir Dogs |

heresthenews | Private HMD

And these guys too.

Edited 2013-05-04 20:38 (UTC)

I love playing with you! I have no criticism!

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Len Harper/Kagamine ||

altereaped
Saul Livingston ||

mrlivingskull
Rin Kagamine ||

doubleringuns

Less Active
Momo Momone ||

pinkutau
Haku Yowane ||

hakupier

Emmerdale
Aaron Livesy |

teenagebadboy | HMD

Teen Wolf
Derek Hale |

lurkerwolf | HMD

Andromeda
Rommie |

iamandromeda | HMD

Uncharted
Harry Flynn |

youhavebeenflynned | HMD

every now and then i tag your muses out of pity but overall you are an awkward and difficult player to write off of. at first i thought this was because you were esl, since a lot of your communication issues are very common to esl types. but then i learned english is your native tongue so. part of the problem, too, is that you chase shipping to the exclusion of everything else. i have seen you tag murderers, psychopaths and flat-out complete monsters with your aaron muse hoping to get a ship going

i'd like you to know this isn't just me, a lot of players find rping with you to be an awkward experience and your name regularly makes the rounds over at wg

http://wankgate.dreamwidth.org/11212.html?thread=28199884#cmt28199884
http://wankgate.dreamwidth.org/12226.html?thread=33036994
http://wankgate.dreamwidth.org/14514.html?thread=42400690#cmt42400690
http://wankgate.dreamwidth.org/14695.html?thread=43450471#cmt43450471
http://wankgate.dreamwidth.org/14975.html?thread=44661631#cmt44661631

i don't think you're a BAD rper, just that your writing needs more polish and your characterization more depth. you might want to focus on your more local muses like derek or johnny (why isn't he here?) instead of aaron. being a character from a british soap, few players are familiar with his canon and the ones that are find him difficult to write with anyway owing to his overbearing aggression

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totally new anon

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Broken!Sherlock || Sherlock BBC

noangel_nothero
Canon Sherlock || Sherlock BBC

improbably_true
Uni!Sherlock || Sherlock BBC

long_legged_buccaneer
'John Harrison' || Star Trek: Into Darkness

sanguinolent

Less Active
Child!Sherlock, between 6-12years || Sherlock BBC

bitty_genius

Sam Gamgee @

adstringendum
his personal hmd if you dont feel like posting here.

sometimes other guys around here and meme comms

bring the concrit!!!!

Edited 2013-05-04 22:02 (UTC)

Just this guy - Jack Harkness (Doctor Who/Torchwood)

PMs are fine if you want to be more private. :-)

Dean Winchester | Supernatural |

righteously formerly fromtherack @

entranceway
Private HMD

Also his mirror for

entranceway:

ontherack

I would seriously appreciate any and all crit, advice, comments, anything at all.

I really enjoyed tagging your Dean in that meme awhile back! His voice and characterization are really good, and you offer a lot to work with in your tags. It was fun playing off of you and helping to develop the semi-storyline we had going at the time. Thumbs up!

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Kagura (

chinagirl) |

hollyheights &

gargleblasted
Ice King (

numberonebabe) |

gargleblasted

I have anon enabled hmds for all my characters, but I'm always interested in hearing what I can do to improve.

route_29

Jeane | No More Heroes |

begetsvengeance
Barby | Panty and Stocking with Garterbelt |

queenbeeyotch

@

smashacademy

Celestia Ludenberg | Dangan Ronpa |

trumped_card

@Memes & Museboxes

Hazama (Yuuki Terumi) | BlazBlue |

afarewelltoarm
Filia & Samson | Skullgirls |

begetsvengeance
Colress | Pokémon Black 2 & White 2 |

unknownfactor
Viola Cadaverini | Ace Attorney |

hee_hee_hee
Nekomaru Nidai | Super Dangan Ronpa 2 |

spiritedcoach

Any crit at all would be much appreciated! Also, if you'd like some samples I can provide them for you.

Your Viola is perfect. Perfectly terrifying. Aaaahhh!!

I love her. =)

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damned_institute:
Sora | Kingdom Hearts |

lighthearted
Guy Cecil | Tales of the Abyss |

nobleman
Castiel | Supernatural |

freewill

@

cfud:
Castiel | Supernatural |

freewill

@

entranceway:
Martha Jones | Doctor Who |

selfrespecting

Belated as always, but so far your Martha has been absolutely delightful to read!

I can hear her voice clearly in both log and [that comment spam thing on whose name I'm totally blanking right now] style. She's always been one of my favourite companions in canon and I truly enjoy seeing how you integrate her so seamlessly into Wonderland.

I don't have any concrit or suggestions yet, unfortunately, so all I can say for the moment is thank you for bringing her to eway, you're really making her shine!

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Tohko Amano-Bungaku Shoujo-tohko_amano

chaos-Xenosaga-lightofhumanity

Raphael-El Shaddai: Ascension of the Metatron-godheals

Yotsuba Koiwai-Yotsuba!&-sunflowerfairy

Just this brat here.

Any and all crit is appreciated and I have an HMD up on his journal too.

I don't really have any crit for you, but I do like roleplaying with you. I will say that.

Speaking of which I believe its your tag on our one...

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Roxas // Kingdom Hearts //

theotherpromise
Personal HMD: HERE

Kaworu Nagisa // Evangelion //

apotredelalune
Personal HMD: HERE

Others located HERE.

DAMNED:
Nina Fortner ◖ Monster ◖

mirrorimage

EXSILIUM:
Nina Fortner ◖ Monster ◖

mirrorimage

POLYCHROMATIC:
Gabriel ◖ Angel Sanctuary ◖

greatcherubim

HAVEN:
Sara Mudou ◖ Angel Sanctuary ◖

happybride

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Chuck Shurley | Supernatural |

godsprophet | HMD

Any and all crit, advice, comments, pictures, etc., are more than welcome.

Chuck's personal HMD is non-IP tracking, anon enabled, and all comments are screened if you would prefer bringing it there instead of here.

Please and thank you!

bakerstreet & dear_mun;

bilbo baggins → the hobbit {

experting}
éowyn → the lord of the rings {

forthoseloved}

Rapunzel | Tangled |

daydreaming
Ariel | The Little Mermaid |

seacups
Usagi Tsukino | Sailor Moon |

tiare
Rei Hino | Sailor Moon |

prediction
Makoto Kino | Sailor Moon |

denkou
Botan | Yu Yu Hakusho |

ferries
Yukina | Yu Yu Hakusho |

crylittlesister
Starfire | Teen Titans |

tamaran
Raven | Teen Titans |

mantras
Sam Winchester (season two) | Supernatural |

exorcising

I also have a general HMD here that's anon enabled and screened.

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seacups.

because b cups were just a little too small.

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Characters in games

cape_kore
Riley Samson |

undomesticated | Teen Wolf OC | Private HMD

cityofariel
Tumnus |

lyricalfaun | Chronicles of Narnia | Private HMD

Characters in memes and drs
Sheriff Stilinski |

longsufferingsigh | Teen Wolf | Private HMD
Stiles Stilinski |

teenyoda | Teen Wolf | Private HMD

Character List. They're not brought out often, but I do like playing them from time to time.

I would most like to know if I'm getting the voices of my canon characters right and if there's anything about my oc that needs to be worked on. =)

All are at

cityofariel, and occasionally around here and dear_mun.

Kuroudo Akabane | Getbackers |

compensatingfedora
Mion Sonozaki | Higurashi no Naku Koro ni |

wanttoplayagame
Shizuo Heiwajima | Durarara!! |

reallyhatesviolence

bakerstreet/

dear_mun
Beezle | The Fantastic Adventures of Unico |

devilofsolitude
Slithe | Thundercats(2011) |

amindlesslackey
Slowking | Pokemon the Movie 2000 |

icouldusepants
Professor Oak | Pokemon Special/Adventures |

meanoldnut

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vatheon
Johnny Rayflo | Vassalord |

not_heavens_adam

@

destinystrings
Johnny Rayflo | Vassalord |

not_heavens_adam
Femi Robinson | OC |

justkeeprunning
Lanister | OC |

jazzandtiramisu

@

damned
Locke Cole | Final Fantasy VI |

kings_thief

@

towerofanimus
Ib | Ib |

theredrose

@

entranceway
Jack Harkness | Torchwood |

thislevelofperfection

Others:
Owen Harper | Torchwood |

weevilroyalty
Gabriel | Supernatural |

ontheirside

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bakerstreet /

sixwordstories /

dear_mun
Will Graham | Hannibal |

pendulumofmind
Jack aka Subject Zero | Mass Effect |

psychoticbi0tic
Skellig | Skellig |

something_like

lastvoyages
Freddy Newendyke | Reservoir Dogs |

everynerve_ending
Emil Blonsky | MCU |

likeamonster
Kozak | Shaggy Dog |

sharpsuitfluffytail

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Just dropping by to say I've been enjoying your Will so far. :) He's ringing true to character based on the episodes I've seen. Hoping to enable you to a game when the season ends perhaps.