Not so much a fan of the shooting. I'm game for pain, but that was... not quite as much fun as I would have hoped. Slapping, yes. Spanking, please. Everything else? Have your wicked way with me, Detective.

[His thumb grazed over her nipple, flicking it back and forth as he gave another grind in, thrusting until he couldn't get a smidgen closer, then grinding against her to tease her clit.]