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[thememesock]

    ☑ HOW'S MY DRIVING MEME
basic formatting borrowed from here

All of us have those moments where we are uncertain about our characterization. Sometimes feedback is the best medicine! So, step on up and post your roleplay accounts and the games you have them in. Let others come by and tell you how you're doing and let others know what you think! Give legitimate reasons and not just "I love you!" or "You suck!". Save that for the anon memes.

     » Don't circlejerk.
     » Flaming will not be tolerated, play nicely!
     » Remember to give critique

Comments

Sol

[pinkutau]

MUSELIST
✘ Momo Momone | UTAU (AU) | pinkutau
✘ Saul Livingston | Original Character | mrlivingskull
✘ Len Harper | Vocaloid (AU) | altereaped
✘ Rin Kagamine | Vocaloid (AU) | doubleringuns
✘ Haku Yowane | Vocaloid (AU) | hakupier


As far as I can remember, I've actually not gotten critique on any of these characters before - constructive feedback would be welcome. =)

Each has a private HMD in their journal (with the exception of Haku, who's still being voicetested) that you can use if you prefer that route.

Nor

[toobig]

No personal account, so.

Attack on Titan

• Bertholdt Fubar toobig
  
• Lance Corporal Levi springcleaning
  
• Marco Bodt fiftypercentoff

(Super) Dangan Ronpa (2)

• Chihiro Fujisaki notbinary
  
• Gundam Tanaka chaoshamsterlord

[cannotredo]

there has been an influx of Levis lately, but yours really stands out! I like how you approach his texting/reading and he's as saucy as ever, but not without maintaining a balance with his obsessive compulsiveness/and raging tsun qualities. his temper/attitude isn't overdone, either. he's become a favorite of mine!

[toobig]

Aaah, thank you! I've been worried about him... I'm really glad he stands out in a good way!

[cannotredo]

his tags are always fun, so no worries!

[comeonthensexy]

asgardeventide
♣ John Watson | Sherlock | hadbadays
♣ The Eleventh Doctor | Doctor Who | comeonthensexy
♣ Uther Pendragon | Merlin | foodshortage

exitvoid
♣ Lavi | D.Gray-Man | gonewithistory
♣ The First Doctor | Doctor Who | lapels

poly_chromatic
♣ Merlin | Merlin | destinedtobeunpopular

Memes/PSLs/dear_mun etc
♣ Barnabus "Barney" Stinson | How I Met Your Mother | cobestfriend
♣ Elliot Nightray | Pandora Hearts | bitchings
♣ Harold "Coop" Cooplowski | Megas XLR | prosmashing
♣ Rokujou Miharu | Nabari No Ou | indiffendence
♣ The Second Doctor | Doctor Who | dododo
♣ The Third Doctor | Doctor Who | gobybessie
♣ The Ninth Doctor | Doctor Who | gonebananas
♣ The Tenth Doctor | Doctor Who | littleshops
♣ Vicki Pallister | Doctor Who | oftroy

Alison

[reallyhatesviolence]

@ cityofariel

- Shizuo Heiwajima | Durarara!! | reallyhatesviolence
- Mion Sonozaki | Higurashi no Naku Koro ni | wanttoplayagame

Also play them around memes, usually Shizuo.

[daisily]

Homeless:

Daisy Buchanan | The Great Gatsby (2013 film) | daisily
Hayley Stark | Hard Candy | photographed
Misonoo Nanako | Oniisama e (anime) | junest
Misonoo Nanako | Oniisama e (manga) | letterist
Yaehara Daria | Gekka Ryouran Romance | pessimistic

[onasteelhorse]

Supernatural
John Winchester | didhisbest | Private HMD
Dean Winchester | onasteelhorse | Private HMD
Sam Winchester | luciferspromdress/onlytobenormal | Private HMD
Bobby Singer | anoldgrouch | Private HMD

Bates Motel
Dylan Massett | theotherson | Private HMD
Norman Bates | isamothersbestfriend | n/a

Others
Anthony DiNozzo Jr. | NCIS | yesboss | Private HMD
Agent Kay | Men in Black| heyslick | Private HMD
Merle Dixon | The Walking Dead | wontbeg | Private HMD

And all these other guys

[consulting_freak]

I'm only currently active on this guy, but I would like to know if there's anything I should touch up on with characterization?

[controlls]

havenrpg

Hazama (Yuuki Terumi) | BlazBlue | controlls

homeless

Bad Girl | No More Heroes | batterthanyou
Jeane | No More Heroes begetsvengeance
The Duke of Detroit | Motorcity | limmo
Death the Kid | Soul Eater | almostsymmetrical
Celestia Ludenberg | Dangan Ronpa | trumped_card
Sakura Oogami | Dangan Ronpa | wrestled
Byakuya Togami | Dangan Ronpa | ungodlyrich
Sister Hel | Code of Princess | holydeath
Lady Zozo | Code of Princess | undeadparts
GLaDOS | Portal | brbtesting
Barby/Queen Bee | Panty & Stocking with Garterbelt | queenbeeyotch

And a few others over here if you want to take a look at my muselist.

[whentheypassthehat]

Shiny new muse, any crit at all would be greatly appreciated.

giveitallshesgot is also me, and the only other one I have who's active (ish) at the moment. Full muselist here.

[(Anonymous)]

I'm really impressed your Scotty! I can hear his voice in my head each time I have threaded with him.

[whentheypassthehat]

Thank you very much! I really appreciate that :)

[blueboxmods]

I'm a homeless bum living on the streets of Bakerstreet.

Captain Malcolm Reynolds captainbrowncoat
Captain James T.Kirk thefarmboy
Captain Jack Harkness iwasforgiven
Clara Oswald braveheartclara
Leonard 'Bones' McCoy iamadoctordammit
The Sixth Doctor technicolorcoat
The Eleventh Doctor space_gandalf
Gabriel Gray thebestbrainsintown
Owen Harper wanker4life

Here is my personal HMD if you wish to leave me something a little more private.

[uluithiad]

so far the only character i have in a game is this pudgy fuzzy little curmudgeon over in adstringendm

muselist of others i sometimes take out for memes is over here!

[donotsummon]

apping to adventuresofooo
Bill Cipher | Gravity Falls | donotsummon

@ dear_mun, bakerstreet, museboxes, etc
Lil' Gideon | Gravity Falls | telemysticist
Turbo | Wreck-It Ralph | roadblasted
King Candy | Wreck-It Ralph | confectioncrown
Heloise | Jimmy Two-Shoes | miserygenius
Jimmy Two-Shoes | Jimmy Two-Shoes (AU) | withgoodintentions
Randy Cunningham | Randy Cunningham: 9th Grade Ninja | smokeb0mbs
Spencer Wright | Dude, That's My Ghost! | filmwrights

Maya

[lovethathatch]

@ ink_city

Veser Hatch | Hanna is Not a Boy's Name | lovethathatch
Starscream | Transformers: Fall of Cybertron | yayntz_rayr_zhoh
Cyclonus | Transformers (IDW) | notsostraightforward
Jazz | Transformers (Animated) | smoothlike
Breakdown | Transformers Prime | neverrun

@ re_alignment

Blitzwing | Transformers (Animated) | thermosomatic
Kaon | Transformers (IDW) | electriccon
Veser Hatch | Hanna is Not a Boy's Name | lovethathatch

@ themainframe

Swindle | Transformers (Animated) | makedeals_notwar

@ dear_mun, bakerstreet, museboxes, etc

Fortress Maximus | Transformers (IDW) | 3years_2months_10days
Megatron | Transformers Prime | throughtyranny
Edward Nigma (PI) | Batman/DC Comics | noncompulsatory
Murdoc Niccals | Gorillaz | bass_slayer (if anyone even remembers when I played this guy, orz

Hello lovely~

[rungout]

/rolls in here

LEMME SEE HERE.

Okay, so I haven't played with a lot of your muses but Imma do this all the same. Starscream is always entertaining as hell to interact with, especially with Smokescreen. I really like the voice you have for him. He's the right level of snark and wit and just asshole in general. You've got a wonderful grasp on that sort of nature, imo.

Blitzwing never ceases to amuse me and I really want the chance to get to know him better.

FFOOORRTT MAAXXX. I seriously really like the voice you've got behind your Fort Max. There's a good mix of broken and determined that you handle very nicely. He's not too much of anything in particular; the perfect mix of the rundown head guard that is a project of what Overlord did to him. Seriously, bravo to you on him; you've got a really good grasp on him, m'dear.

As far as actual crit goes, just have more confidence in yourself. I know that's one of those 'easier said than done' sort of things, but you have a lot of talent for roleplaying and I think sometimes you hold yourself back. <3 Don't though, I mean it.

[lovethathatch]

oh mai you've given me the vapors, ma'am.

No but seriously, considering that you're an awesome Rung to play against, Fort Max is definitely a challenge to live up to. uwu I'm glad that I'm not overdoing it.

I NEED EXCUSES TO THROW BLITZWING AT YOU and also more Smokescreen and Starscream stuff, yesss.

Thank you for all the feedback and such, I know confidence is a thing I have issues with, and I'm... trying to work on it, at least.

[rungout]

And the fact that you're trying says a lot about your dedication to your characters and your love for playing. <3 <3 <3

BB, WE JUST NEED LOTS MORE CR IN GENERAL ALL OVER THE PLACE.

[lovethathatch]

u3u

SMASH OUR CHARACTERS TOGETHER LIKE THE DOLLS THEY ARE

[rungout]

AWYEAH~

[illbemyself]

Just this guy at the moment. Crit is much appreciated!

✘ Sherlock Holmes | BBC's Sherlock | illbemyself

Wolfeh

[rungout]

@ re_alignment

Rung | Transformers IDW Comics | rungout
Rocket Raccoon | Guardians of the Galaxy | furryfarkinfiend
Lyra Belacqua | His Dark Materials | imnotyours
Megatron | Bayverse | projecticeman
Smokescreen | Transformers: Prime | shutupndrive

@ Various museboxes, memes, dear_mun

Bumblebee | Transformers IDW Comics | donttasemebee
Predaking | Transformers: Prime | bigdaddydragon
Clara Oswin Oswald | Doctor Who | ibakedasouffle
Bumblebee | Bayverse | radiochatter
Overlord | Transformers IDW Comics | robotlips
Jeff Moreau | Mass Effect | whoneedslegstofly
Mordin Solus | Mass Effect | noneedifsimple
Applejack | MLP: FIM | appleofmyeye

And others here

Hiii

[lovethathatch]

GOOD GOD YOUR OVERLORD IS TERRIFYING

in a horribly and mildly hilarious campy way, but still, TERRIFYING.

And... it's hard to put into words, but you manage to make Rung one of the sweetest guys ever, but you don't make him a total pushover, y'know? He definitely cares about his comrades, but he also stands up for himself, his attitude has a bit of bite to it sometimes (especially when he's talking to Prowl).

And Smokescreen is cute and also a bit dumb but well-meaning and basically perfectly canon.

Basically, for the characters I've gotten to play against, you manage to have a good balance of redeeming qualities and... I don't want to say "bad" qualities, because they're not always, but they're more balancing, I'd say.

I caaaaan't think of much crit, although that might be more because I'm still kinda new with tagging against you and haven't seen all you have to offer? But really, as long as the characters are likeable, I'll probably never be able to find faults, I'm the worst at HMDs P:

[rungout]

OVERLORD JUST WANTS TO LOVE EVERYONE. WHY WON'T ANYONE ACCEPT HIS LOVE? GAWD.

But no, seriously, thank you. Villains are those characters that I care most about in terms of 'getting them right', so to speak, so it means a lot to hear that. He's been fun to mess around with thus far and I really do want to do more stuff with him at some point. BD

ashdakshdkajs thank you ;-; I'm also so worried that Rung comes off as just pathetic or something so hearing that really means a lot. It's what I'm aiming to do and to know that someone at least notices it boosts my confidence with him a bit more.

OH PFFT HUSH. o////o Smokescreen is just a derp.

I seriously can't thank you enough for your kind comments, I mean it. ;-;

[lovethathatch]

BECAUSE HIS IDEA OF "LOVE" IS CAUSING PSYCHOLOGICAL AND PHYSICAL TRAUMA, WHAT IS WRONG WITH YOU.

;3 He does tend to get in a lot of trouble, I've noticed, but it's usually spaced out enough that it isn't annoying.

Yes but Smokescreen is a bit of a derp in canon so you just proved my point! Hahah!

[rungout]

...ISN'T THAT WHAT LOVE MEANS? BD BD

I really just like having Rung beat up and stuff; it's a lot of fun because he doesn't have any real way to protect himself which means he can have all sorts of terrible shit done to him. :X

WELL....HE...FINE. B| Thank you again a million times over

[3years_2months_10days]

NO. NO, IT REALLY ISN'T

Not a problem. <3 It's fun to watch your muses get torn apart! 8D

Queenie

[unit031]

@ rubycity_rp
Labrys | Persona 4: Arena | unit031

@dear_mun, bakerstreet, and museboxes.
Sanderson Mansnoozie (The Sandman) | Rise of the Guardians | mansnoozie
Jason Todd (The Red Hood) | DC Comics | waywardbird
Shinji Ikari | Evangelion | chosenchild

Breezy

[girlspukepretty]

Aw yissss HMD. /waddles on forth/

@ re_alignment
- Ambulon | rstlsslegsyndrm
- G1 Frenzy | rednotbluethx
- AOS Leonard McCoy | adamndoctor
- Bayverse Jetfire | soniamwheel

Other:
- Kaon | electricocaine
- Quark | iforgotmypaxil
- Krok | whataloadof

[rungout]

FRENZY YOU ARE A LITTLE SHIT AND NEED TO GO JUMP OFF A CLIFF. B| B| B|

Aka he's absolutely WONDERFUL. I love how many fucks he just doesn't give and every chance I get to play with him is fantastic. He's just the perfect amounts of everything that he needs to be.

Ambulon, though I haven't played with him tons yet, is adorkable. I don't know how else to explain it. I need to find a reason to interact with him more, dammit.

McCoy is fucking amazing. I want to bounce my Scotty off him one day omg He has this way of making Lyra feel like she's done something wrong and, at the same time, makes her want to kick him and I love it.

AND THEN THERE'S KAON. I know I failed at keeping our Overlord-Kaon log going but fucking hell your Kaon is awesome. You've got that perfect mix of midly sarcastic, dry, and uncaring and it plays out beautifully in your writing.

TL;DR I LOVE ROLEPLAYING WITH YOU ;-;

[(Anonymous)]

» Don't circlejerk.

[rungout]

Aw, but anon..

Okay, well, in that case, the only big thing I've noticed is that, at times, McCoy and Ambulon have a similar sort of voice. They don't bleed much, but it's one of those 'Cut from the same sort of mold' things. Definitely not as much as McCoy and Ratchet would be, but there's sometimes a bit of a bleed that goes on there. Honestly that's the only big thing I've ever really noticed when it comes to your roleplaying and even then, it's very minor. (And tends to happen to everyone when we have those characters with similar sorts of traits and personalities.)

[rstlsslegsyndrm]

Thank you for the input! Yeah, I'll try to be a little more careful with that. McCoy tends to be more biting and harsh while Ambulon is more deadpan and tetchy at times. Both are bitchy, though, lmao.

[unsleeved]

@entranceway & bakerstreet:

unsleeved | Daryl Dixon | The Walking Dead

And uh. That's it. /sobbing I AM A ONE TRICK PONY.

[greenbloodedhobgoblin]

MUSE LIST
✘ Anthony 'Tony' Stark | MCU | scrapbox
✘ Spock | AOS | greenbloodedhobgoblin
✘ Spinneret Mindfang | Homestuck | spinneret_mindfang
✘ Sherlock Holmes | Sherlock | in_my_mind_palace

All HMD posts can be found through the navigation functions on each journal. I haven't received any feedback for some of my characters so if you've seen me posting around go right ahead and give some concrit :] I'd love to hear back from some people. Anon is on for all the posts.

Or if you want you can just comment here. :] That works as well~

[failblazer]

@ amatomnes
Fujiwara no Mokou | Touhou Project | failblazer

@ hollyheights
Fujiwara no Mokou | Touhou Project | failblazer

@ exitvoid
Ichirin Kumoi | Touhou Project | cloudnun

@ cityofariel
Hong Meiling | Touhou Project | mastergater

@ havenrpg
Last Order | To Aru Majutsu no Index | tinyshock

All of them have their own HMD posts with the exception of Last Order. Dump her crit in another personal HMD or a sock puppet sent PM or something. I'll have a post for her up soon.


Memes and stuff;

Mukuro Ikusaba | Dangan Ronpa | fashionfollower
Ymir | Attack on Titan | ymirin

[unwahr]

YMIR • shingeki no kyojin/attack on titan • unwahr
HANJI/HANGE ZOE • shingeki no kyojin/attack on titan • qwq